- Sanat Acharya
I moved thru the Rundle in the evening's light
All shops and artists singing for my one sight
I felt like writing out my worries of vain
Wait! it was all golden, but it was no gold
The lightings couldn't match memories old
I reached to the pen but left it closed again
I plunged into the Glenelg in summer's heat
The ocean kept its tides low and waters neat
I felt like writing out my feelings so drain
But, those rainy days and childhood chips
My balcony's stagnant sea and paper ships
I opened the pen but then dropped it again
I pushed myself to see that old resting place
Found pals to cherish me with their smiley face
I felt like writing out my loneliness and pain
Those dirty tea shops and cloudy smoke
Friends to meet again and memories so close
I grabbed the pen and then I wrote again
Tuesday, April 8, 2008
I Wrote Again
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You are a moving poet. I am impressed with your ability to present ordinary thing with extraordinary artistic creativity. It is simply brilliant.
ReplyDeleteNice poem, Beautifully written.
ReplyDeleteI enjoyed reading read. Well written. Thanks for sharing with us
ReplyDeleteGood Comeback Sanat
ReplyDeleteonce again u combac on the floors,sanat. your poem seems to be memorable.
ReplyDeleteit simply carries poetic diligence.
ReplyDeletebut i believe it lacks creative aspect. Old wine in new bottle.
Poem is all about delighting the senses of its audience. In this light the poem is replete with insightful thinking, harmonious patterm and path breaking presentation. I firmly believe if Sanat continues to move ahead in this pace, he will one day be crowned with the title of new-age Shakespear
ReplyDeletePoem is all about delighting the senses of its audience. In this light, the poem is replete with insightful thinking, spendid cohorence and astute presentation. Sanat depicts the skills to crown the title of new age Shkespear.
ReplyDeleteI just wounder how he can write such a beautiful poem in less than one hour......
ReplyDeleteu can think from all angle.. i know it..but now u have proved it as well...
give continuity....u will reach height!
well most of them had already written what i wanted to write so i thought of not writing but couldn't help myself so even i grabbed my pen to write it is very beautifully written
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