Shyam Kumar Yadav
Transformation of a chauvinist into a quisling,
A traitor born by the virtue of the arrogated Mother,
Exanguination from the rented womb,
Indifferent terrae filius, searcing the Beget,
Donor of the life, apathetic in upbringing,
Drifting in oblivion, the paucity of the pauper,
Selling his ethics in the eleemosynary of the benevolent,
Ready in giving the acid test of his servility,
Turned without contempt, immediately into the Red,
The moment, he is looking, only about his Bread.
I wish my English was that good to understand your poem. Though i could not follow your every lines i think i figured out the theme behind the poem. The theme is good though. I suggest you to write simple poems. Keep writing.
ReplyDeleteke ho shyam ji ;tapaina le ta malai english ma ta kahan ho kahan chodidinu bhayo ta. Tapain ta jiudo jagdo GRE po hunu hundo rahecha ta.
ReplyDeleteanyway poem dami cha and it really reflects the meaning of bread. Well done .keep on writing
Shyam Ji, I don't know whether this poem is good or bad. Simply because, I did not understand much. Now, I am thinking about to read your poem again with the help of dictionary.
ReplyDeletei kind of understood the theme of your poem after looking up almost every word in the dictionary. I think this poem has a deeper meaning than what i understand. Shyam dai can you please gives us an explanation of this poem i really want to understand it fully.
ReplyDeleteHi Shyam,
ReplyDeleteI couldn't read the poem without the use of dictionery. So, it will be too early to make any hasty comment. The poem sounds quite complext in meaning .
oho my god!
ReplyDeletecomment u later.....after i have more time to understand it..
I don't think that the poet himself can explain the real meaning of this poem,if he could then we must salute him.otherwise i just want to say its not a good idea to wear a dead tiger skin for a jackal.
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