-नवराज
लुकि-लुकि घरि-घरि तिमीलाई नियाल्दा,चाल नपाएको नाटक गर्दै मुस्कान तिमीले फाल्दा।
बुझिकन नबुझे झै गर्ने तिमी उस्तै,
पत्तै नदिई तिम्रो लागि मर्ने उस्तै म।
आउने जाने जसमा पनि तिम्रै मुहार देख्छु,
मिठो बोली सुन्दा पनि तिम्रै भनी झस्कन्छु।
जहाँ गए नि, यादमा सधैं आउने तिमी उस्तै,
तिमी हिंड्ने प्रत्येक मोडमा धाउने उस्तै म।.....
हरेक रात सपनिमा बारम्बार आयौ,
तिमीले पनि शायद मेरो झझल्को पो पायौ।
धैर्य गरी मेरै बाटो हेर्ने तिमी उस्तै,
प्रकट हुन अनेक मौका कुर्ने उस्तै म।
बिर्सिएछु आँफैलाई, दिक्क लाग्छ अचेल,
बिना तिमी जमाना नै, फिक्का लाग्छ अचेल।
पत्तै नदीइ मन-मुटु चोर्ने तिमी उस्तै,
मुटु खुल्लै तिम्रो सामु छोड्ने उस्तै म।
The poems you have written recently somehow express the unexpressed desire of sexuality while viewed from Freudian point of view. Atleast, the literature provides ventillating point for young writers. This is good. Anonymous
ReplyDeleteI do not see anything unexpressed desire of sex. However, what I canspeculate is that the auther was shy to express his feelings and that is not unusual for Nepali youth.
ReplyDeleteDear anonymous, sometimes the reader finds different reflections in poem and articulte the meaning in their own way the writer is not aware of. Sigmon Freid has stated sexulaity lies in every love expression. This is his personal point of view and every one may not accept that.
ReplyDeleteIt is your freedom to understand meaning in your own way.However, the poem is written in context of unexpressed feeling.And thanks for you valuable comment.
I would like to thank Mr Deepak Bista for his initial support and appreciation. My poems are very personal... I am very sorry for that. I hope exploring the self will assist in exploring the outer world in the very future...
ReplyDeleteAlso, a special thanks goes to Navaraj for his healing poem as a response...
Humm.... for the annymous...; this poem is for to all those someones who have faith in their beloved....shared feelings...and wish to sharelife as well
Once again good writing Nabaraj! I was always impressed with your writing and I am sure, I will be in future too. Not only yours after reading all the articles I must say we do have some great talents within the community. Well done INLS for providing platform for all these talents.
ReplyDeleteKeep writing everyone, loved to reading them.
Shekhar
Thanks Shekhar dai, we need your encouragement and suggestions to increase participation among all of us in the blog and make it more likable and lovable.
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