Rajan poudel
You are incomparable; you are one of a kind
You are sweeter than the sweetest wind
Time passes by but your beauty shall not fade
No matter what, you will always precede the rest
Your beauty goes beyond the mountains
Exceeds the clarity of the oceans
You are beautiful than the sound of falling rain
No matter what I compare you to, all fail
You are incomparable my sweetheart
You are one of a kind!
Good one Rajan! Are you in love? ha ha...
ReplyDeletehehe nope kush uncle.
ReplyDeletei m sure he is in love;). you kno what, add 4 lines and make it a sonnet!
ReplyDeleteYou should be in love to write this kind of poem
ReplyDelete" Every man is poet when he is in love" they say.
ReplyDelete" Me saayer to nahi,
magar ye hasi,
jab se dekha maine tujhko,
saaayari aagayee" there is a song.
Keep on posting your progress. Best of luck.
Well done rajan.You are a poet at heart. Poets write about love. Shakespeare, Keats, Shelly, and many great English Poets have written love poems and have become great.Love is a great inspiration and vice versa.
ReplyDeleteGood one Rajan! i like it much..
ReplyDeletewrite more ...
hehe... i am not in love guys its all imaginative. Thankyou all for your comments.
ReplyDeleteHello Saathi haru, 2 ghanta huna aatyo yo website kholeko. sutne bela bhaisakyo tara sarai ramailo bhai raa chha. ananda aayo. ke ho hya ta sabai kabi, sahitya kaar raichhan. Great work. keep it up.
ReplyDeletenamaste rajan ji, can you please write one more love poem?
ReplyDeletenamaste anonymous ji, Thankyou for your comment. I will try to write another one soon.
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