Rajan Poudel
Regret and remorse is too much to bear
Oh god! I cannot control my tears
Please take away my fears
Please take away my pain
It is just too much to bear…
I won't do what I did, again
I want my happiness again
I want to see my future again
I promise I will be good
I know I should
I want to live in peace
I want to live with care
Give me some hope
Give me some light
I promise, I will bring the delights
Let me live again
There is a lot to gain
I want to love myself again.
Rajan ji,
ReplyDeletevery nice poem to read,
very nicely written indeed,
Your hidden talents are showing,
Maybe a great poet in making,
Do keep showing your talents,
Maybe who knows, one day the nobel prize could be yours....
Any ways you did a good job,
Hope to read much much more in the future..
kule la la poem lai poem le reply deko.. lala dami cha ta ni post garna tero
ReplyDeleteRajan,
ReplyDeleteYou have written the excellent poem. I am really impressed with your brilliant way of putting form and content harmoniously. Keep it up.
Good poem....
ReplyDeletearu pani post gara hai!
Thankyou both binay dai and bhuwan dai. Much appreciated.
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