- Sanat Acharya
Today I worked a lot
I saw the sun at both ends of horizon
Sore are joints, brains cannot plot
My feet feel like carrying a ton
There is a bottle shop on my way
To erase this tiredness, I got to drink today.
Today I performed great in school
I achieved all round excellence
I am exited! I got to keep it cool
I fear if my thoughts go nonsense
Yes! There is a bottle shop on my way
To calm down myself, I got to drink today. ...
Today I did nothing mentionable
I met no one, did no job, wrote nothing
This loss of time is absolutely irritable
I am upset and can't concentrate on a thing
Good! There is a bottle shop on my way
To regain my concentration, I got to drink today.
Today I have no complaint, I did okay
Neither I did awesome, nor was I bad
But I am confused what should I say
When subconscious ask- Happy or sad
Thanks! There is a bottle shop on my way
To solve this confusion, I got to drink today.
Dear Sanat Bhai,
ReplyDeleteGood work and specially when you were a bit tipsy!! I like it.
Dear Sanat,
ReplyDeleteYour poem has made me feel happy. I have visualised a poet within you in the making. Keep on exploring your talent in literature. I am really impressed and agree what you have expressed. That is the honesty in literature and expression. The form and content of the poem are simply brilliant.
Today i read the poem you posted
ReplyDeleteThe same feelings and stories of mine it sounded.
I have to celebrate that i got the companion.
Great! There is a bottle shop on my way too.
To cherish myself, I got to drink today.
i felt like this was my story..................beautiful piece of work!!!!!!!!!!!
ReplyDeleteWinter's here, its getting cold;
ReplyDeleteA couple of glasses do the trick, I am told;
There's no bottle shop on my way;
But,Sanath and Nabaraj will be drinking all the way;
So, I go to find them asap and DRINK TODAY!